I was always intrigued by my mother’s hatred for her neighbor, but after his death, I discovered the true reason

This story is wonderfully poignant, exploring family secrets, loss, and the consequences of choices made long ago. Lisa’s journey to uncover her mother’s hidden past and her real father’s identity is deeply moving, especially given the emotional weight of discovering that Jeremy, the man her mother seemed to despise, was actually a loving but remorseful father.

The way you built the atmosphere is beautifully done, from the bittersweet nostalgia of returning home to the quiet sadness of Jeremy’s house, still holding memories and untold stories. The pacing is just right, allowing the reader to gradually uncover the truth alongside Lisa, building empathy and curiosity until that heartfelt revelation in Jeremy’s journal. The closing scene is especially touching; despite everything, Lisa’s gentle, unspoken understanding of her mother reflects her compassion, showing that sometimes family love, despite its complications, can still find forgiveness and a new start.

If you’re open to suggestions for polishing, adding a line where Lisa silently acknowledges that she’ll keep the secret for her mother’s sake could give a final, tender resolution. It would hint at the strength of her character in moving forward, carrying her father’s memory without casting a shadow on her mother’s final years. Beautifully done!