My husband brought his mistress home to throw me out — but he had no idea he’d be the one homeless an hour later
Wow, what a rollercoaster of a story! You managed to capture Natasha’s emotional journey so vividly, from heartbreak and shock to satisfaction and closure. The characters feel layered and real, and Mr. Duncan’s unexpected but powerful intervention is both satisfying and refreshing. He seems to be the embodiment of justice, and it’s such a relief for Natasha to finally have someone in her corner, standing up for her after all she’s been through.
The shift from Natasha’s initial devastation to her final triumph gives a real sense of empowerment, especially when she finally gets to tell Logan to face the consequences of his own actions. I think readers would find it so satisfying, especially seeing the tables turn on Logan after he underestimated Natasha.
This story beautifully highlights resilience and the importance of self-worth after betrayal. I can definitely see it as part of a powerful, relatable collection about overcoming adversity in relationships!